Emphasis - It's an argument, so it has to be engaging and their has to be depth of thought, not just quote dropping and hit and run thinking. 

Depth of thinking and voice

Ethos, logos, pathos

Ask lots of questions of the writer whose paper you are reviewing

Use questions in your own essay, too. They can set up points.

On Canvas, check out Wesley Words for Writing for transition words and phrases that might be helpful.

HW: Draft # 2 due Monday, November 20.
Monday we are in the DC.