Activities
Watch Fitzgerald: American Dreamer
Fitzgerald American Dreamer Part 4
Fitzgerald American Dreamer Part 5
Peer feedback on your paper
Controlling Idea
Connections
Voice
Organization (order and flow of ideas)
At the end, write two or three sentences on some strengths of the paper and two or three sentences on some possible areas for improvement or expansion. Perhaps some questions for them..."Have you considered...?
Homework:
Have a revised draft available for peer feedback tomorrow. Make sure that draft contains comments (typed in he margin) explaining the reasoning behind three of your most significant changes between the draft you are working with today and the draft you will submit tomorrow for peer review.
Save the marked-up draft you used in class today and bring it tomorrow. I would like you to hand that in tomorrow for 5 points.
Tomorrow: We will focus on mechanics and wordsmithing more than in previous peer reviews. The final paper is due Monday.
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